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SGA: Second Prime (McKay/Sheppard/Zelenka) [Oct. 5th, 2006|01:13 pm]
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Title: Second Prime
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard/Zelenka
Rating: R
Notes: This is self-indulgent birthday fic. (Happy birthday to me!) Many thanks to miscellanny for the quick'n'dirty beta.
Warnings: None (see policy)

Summary: Radek shrugs again. "It is true. Driven insensible by lust for you, Rodney, I am now trying to break the electronics. Also your team leader wishes to sleep with both of us. Please, don't judge us." (Set late Season One.)



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[User Picture]From: robi0688
2006-10-06 12:33 am (UTC)
Hee! Awesome. Your Zelenka is awesome (seriously, what does it take to seriously ruffle the man?), Rodney is hilariously kinetic, and omg JOHN. Yes. It's all good :)
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-06 07:02 pm (UTC)
*beams* Thank you -- I'm glad you liked my take on the them!
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From: rustler
2006-10-06 01:24 am (UTC)
It should be your birthday more often! This was just a delight -- snappy, fun, and sexy too. Yay!
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-06 07:03 pm (UTC)
I feel about a birthday a month would suit me just fine. *grins*

Thanks -- I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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[User Picture]From: bluebrocade
2006-10-06 03:52 am (UTC)
Ha! I love Rodney! He can get away with anything.
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-06 07:03 pm (UTC)
Especially when he's so very right. *grins* Thanks!
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[User Picture]From: livrelibre
2006-10-06 05:19 am (UTC)
Yay!
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-06 07:04 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thanks!
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[User Picture]From: apple_pi
2006-10-06 06:50 am (UTC)
Oh, you have so nailed Radek Zelenka. (Um. In the sense of characterization. *cough*) This is fabulous, it's like cake!

*uses cake icon in honor of fabulous fic*
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-06 07:05 pm (UTC)
*laughs* Thank you! And oh, what a lovely cake icon it is, too. :)
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[User Picture]From: infinimato
2006-10-06 04:55 pm (UTC)
Seriously YUM.
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-06 07:05 pm (UTC)
Yay! Thank you -- I'm glad you liked it.
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[User Picture]From: apiphile
2006-10-06 08:12 pm (UTC)
Oh fine. That's right. Just as I thought I was escaping, drag me back in with your bloody wonderful characterisation and tawdry filth and humour. God I hate you.
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-12 04:05 pm (UTC)
Oh, the guilt. The crushing, crushing guilt.
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[User Picture]From: tronella
2006-10-06 08:31 pm (UTC)
Hee :D I won't drop them, his eyes promise. It'll be awesome. *glee* Oh, it is great. :)

Hope your birthday was good :)
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-12 04:05 pm (UTC)
*bounce!* Thank you!

It was awesome. I was a dragon.
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From: j00j
2006-10-07 11:41 pm (UTC)
This was a lot of fun! I like these three together.
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-12 04:06 pm (UTC)
So do I! I'm glad you enjoyed it -- thanks for letting me know.
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[User Picture]From: artyartie
2006-10-08 02:58 am (UTC)
So very, very hot, and your Radek? Perfect. :)
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-12 04:06 pm (UTC)
*beams* Thank you so! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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[User Picture]From: elvinborn
2006-10-08 04:47 am (UTC)
Radek cannot recognise Rodney in photographs. To him, Rodney is a collection of movements, a flurry of hand gestures, head tilts and lightening-quick flashes of inspiration. Rodney exists in motion.
I think I'm in love
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-12 04:07 pm (UTC)
Heeh! I had a lot of fun getting that description just right, so I'm very pleased you liked it -- thanks for letting me know.
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[User Picture]From: ardent_muses
2006-10-08 06:06 pm (UTC)
Wow. Your writing throughout this is awesome, and I LOVE your Radek POV. He can be so elusive and you found him. Not to mention your Rodney and Sheppard, which come through loud and clear also. Very nice characterization.

And FUN, too. I was completely charmed. I'd love to see more of this. Or more of them. Or just more, please. :)
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-12 04:08 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much! I love writing from Zelenka's POV, so I'm glad you thought that worked.
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[User Picture]From: severusslave
2006-10-11 10:14 am (UTC)
Oh, wheeeeee! :D
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-12 04:08 pm (UTC)
Heeh! Thanks!
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From: (Anonymous)
2006-10-20 01:05 am (UTC)
I'd just like to add my incoherent squeeing to the list of admirers :). There's just not enough John/Rodney/Radek out there, so yay you for doing you bit to remedy that (though, if you could do your bit some more I wouldn't complain *g*).

The voices were spot-on, Radek especially. The sarcasm was funny, Rodney being right and being smug about it was great. I loved Radek reading John via Rodney, and that brief moment of disappointment when it looked like John might only be interested in Rodney.

I'm glad it wasn't the end days for them. It'd just be wrongwrongwrong for the world, nay, the *galaxy*, to lose that much hotness so soon ;).

Laura.
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-10-20 07:37 pm (UTC)
This is such a lovely comment! Thank you. *beams* I'm very glad you liked this -- it was a lot of fun to write, and you've picked out some of my favourite moments.

It'd just be wrongwrongwrong for the world, nay, the *galaxy*, to lose that much hotness so soon ;).

*snorts* You speak great wisdom. :)
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[User Picture]From: anmkosk
2006-12-12 09:12 pm (UTC)
Wonderful :)
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[User Picture]From: foreverdirt
2006-12-14 10:34 am (UTC)
Thank you!
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